“The Literary Inheritance” by P.J. Kaiser
The call from Alice, my mother-in-law, came at 9am on a Saturday. Steven, my father-in-law, had died. We left home in a flurry of clothes, suitcases and phone calls. More emotional than I have ever seen him, my husband talked to his mom on his cell phone for most of the three hour drive while I fought back tears from the driver’s seat. Our son – eight year old Ben – sat in the back seat and stared out the window. I had told him that grandpa had died and that we were on our way to visit grandma. I explained she would need us to stay there for at least a few days. My flexible writer’s schedule allowed for such deviations from routine, but I knew that my husband’s employer wouldn’t be so easy.
We had just seen my in-laws two weeks prior when they had come to visit us for Easter. He seemed to be in perfect health, he walked every day with Ben to the park. Then came this news that he dropped dead from a heart attack.
For the last part of our trip, we rode the ferry from Seattle to Vashon Island. The three of us momentarily forget the day’s tragedy and enjoy the spectacular views of Puget Sound. We arrived at Steven and Alice’s house – a red brick home dwarfed by an oversized pine tree in the yard. The house sat atop a hill and overlooked the water. Upon arrival, I went about fixing a meal for everybody. I knew poor Alice hadn’t eaten a bite and it was already mid-afternoon. As the four of us gathered around the dinner table, Steven’s absence was palpable. Everybody had assigned seats and his empty chair – in between Alice and John – dominated the table. I bit my lip and forced myself to eat. We tried to focus on the mundane. The appointment to plan the funeral was Sunday morning. John’s sister, living in San Diego, had been called and her flight would arrive at 8:30pm.
At one moment in a lull in the conversation, Alice looked at me and said, “You haven’t told anybody, have you?”
Taken aback by the question, I said, “No. I told Ben’s school there had been a death in the family.”
“Johnny, can you call Les and have him come over this afternoon?”
John said, “Sure, Mom.”
I looked expectantly at Alice and my husband thinking that they might explain who Les was, but no explanation was forthcoming, and so I kept on eating my lunch. After lunch, I took Ben out for a bike ride so that John and his mother could have some privacy.
While roaming the neighborhood streets that wound among the hills in the neighborhood, Ben and I continued our discussion about death and I tried to prepare him the best I could for the events to come. When we got back to the house, there was a dark Lincoln Town Car in the driveway. As we went inside, I heard voices coming from the living room. A man’s voice was saying, “- and we’ll plan for a public reading of the will, of course. If the funeral is on Tuesday, we can have the reading on Wednesday.” Was he talking about Steven? Why would a retired insurance salesman need to have a public reading of his will? And who was this Les guy?
Holding Ben’s hand, I poked my head into the living room and said, “Excuse me, I’m sorry. We’re back – just wanted you to know I’ll be upstairs with Ben.”
As I turned my back to leave, Alice said, “No, it’s best you stayed.” As I turned my head, I saw Les give Alice a glaring look. “No, it’s high time she knew. She’s going to find out anyway. Ben, sweetheart, would you mind going to watch a DVD for awhile?”
I got Ben set up with the upstairs TV with one of his favorite DVD’s and I slowly went into the living room and took a seat next to John. I reached over and held his hand and he gave my hand a squeeze.
Alice said, “My dear, Les is my husband’s publicist.” I glanced at Les and he partly rose from his seat and reached over to shake my hand. I gave him a weak, confused smile. “You see, Steven was a writer. He was always very secretive about his writing and he used a pen name. He never wanted anybody to know about his writing, he really didn’t even share it with me. I got to read his books along with the public after they were published. We always felt bad keeping it from you, dear, but that’s just the way Steve was. He wanted it that way. He didn’t even talk about it with John and his sister.”
I looked at John who had a squeamish, apologetic look on his face and at Les and Alice who wore earnest smiles. “I see. Well, that’s wonderful – I mean – I’m glad that he found something that he loved doing.” I felt uncomfortable that the focus had been put on me.
Alice said, “Steven’s pen name was Christopher Musgrave.”
I gasped and my hand flew up to my mouth. “Oh, my God!” To be a secretive writer was one thing, but to be a New York Times best-selling author, and winner of the National Book Award was quite another. I could not even attempt to reconcile my mild-mannered father-in-law with Christopher Musgrave, one of my favorite authors. I could see by their faces, though, this was no joke.
Alice continued, looking straight at me, “I know we should wait until the reading of the will to discuss this, but I know that Steven had always said that if he were to pass away in the middle of a novel, he would want you, dear, to finish it. He had been working on the notes for his next novel for three months before he died.”
My eyes grew wide, “And he wanted me to finish it?” My face grew red and I glanced at John who was beaming at me.
Alice said, “Yes, dear. It’s about a writer who gets her big break when she inherits an unfinished manuscript from her father-in-law.”


pj, this is one of your best – reads like an essay you’d see in the nytimes. is this true? it could be. nicely done.
That’s a great compliment, Michael – thanks very much
It’s not true, but as with most of my stories, it’s inspired by real life
Well, shoot, that’s a bit of an incentive for everyone hiding behind a pen name, isn’t it? Share your secret with the people you love before it’s too late?
Great piece, P.J.
True, Tony – Seems like at least a few people need to be let in on the secret
Thanks for your comment!
Wow, nice P.J.! It’s a shame she missed out on all the talks the two of them could have shared over their love of writing, the advice, the comraderie. But, the fact that he had enough faith in her to finish his novel says a lot.
Shannon – That was my thinking too – just think of all those chats they could have had and how much she could have learned from him (and perhaps he could have learned from her as well). Thanks for your comment!
What a great story! You should do it! Um. I mean your main character should take this gift and run with it.
Loved the flow of this piece. David Sedaris would be soooo jealous!
PJ! What a great story here. I was so into wondering if it was true (until I read the previous comments).
Now my fingers are crossed that someone in my family will come forward and admit they are Stephen King!
Jim
It’s not hard to do 1st person, but it’s hard to do it well. So my favorite thing about this piece is the voice.
There is a nice balance of giving just enough detail without over doing it while still making sure to show emotions/reactions without simply having the narrator tell them.
I really enjoyed this. You had me all over the place trying to figure out the reveal. Very classy indeed!
I agree this is one of your best. It had a very realistic feel to it, and I kept wondering from the hints what the big secret was. I suspected it was something bad from the look she was given and the secrecy. Never suspected the end. Nice!
P.J.,
Great read. I really enjoyed it, and like the others, I would have said thanks for a window into your real world. The fact it is not, offers a tremendous sentiment to the story itself. Well crafted in the art and in the delivery. Thanks-
Jack
I’d like something like that to drop into my lap too…but BIG shoes to fill
At least she no longer has to worry about her husband’s employer
Ha! Totally delightful. I couldn’t read it fast enough, I wanted to know what was going to happen.
If this is based on a dream, you have very interesting dreams!!!
I really enjoyed this story! Well-done!
An ironic final assignment from Dad!
I don’t have a pen name, but maybe I should let somebody write as me after I die…
Such free-flowing writing – it was more like you sitting across the table from me, telling me a story! Nicely done.
I really enjoyed this. You have a very smooth style. Thanks!
Oh, I love this one! Who wouldn’t want this to happen to them. Your writing was so natural and personal, very realistic. Awesome story!
Great tone to this. Like a story told over morning coffee. I would have regretted losing the chance to talk writing with Steven, but what an inheritance. Great stuff.
great PJ, I love the tone you write in, enjoyed reading.
I found this creepy (in a good way!) because of the last line – so, it really worked for me!
You guys – thanks so very much for all of your wonderful comments! I love that everybody has a slightly different take-away from this story
Thanks so much for stopping by & having a read!
Wow, very nice story. Quite a secret for him to keep. Looks like the sad day became a pretty good one, in the long run, for her.
Very cool story. I like how you took us through the motions of coping with a death, only to drop that bombshell of an ending. The last line is terrific.
Holy crap, I can’t decide if this is a dream-come-true or a horrific nightmare
I would totally collapse under the pressure.
Really well written
This is your strongest writing I’ve seen. I like how it has an essay feel to it. Uncertain how common this theme is, but I’ve seen it before. A tough theme since some readers may not identify–or agree–with the impact of the revelation, but this is where I think the essay-like feel helps.
Eric, Laurita, Dana & David – Thanks so much for your comments! Glad you liked it. David brings up an interesting point – it’s true that a non-writer may not feel quite the same impact as a writer – i will definitely try to get some feedback from nonwriters on this story – thanks!!!
PJ, I don’t know how I missed this one the first time around, but I’m so glad you mentioned it, (in the comment on my story this week). This is such a wonderful story, and so very well-told. I do hope you’ll tell us about her journey in finishing that novel.
Great work!
Thanks so much, Deanna – very sweet of you to check it out. I like the idea of following her journey – we’ll see if that happens …!
I swore I commented on this the first time, but I really liked this concept. You have such a great style.
Carrie – Thanks so much – I love having a reprise of my stories
Very sweet of you to stop by and leave such a nice comment!